Persuasive writing

Have you ever experienced being hungry, and you’re so hungry you want to barf? If you don’t eat enough of most foods you could become allergic to them. It does not feel good to have an allergic reaction because it can also kill you. This also means foods you have never had in your life, you could be allergic to them. 

 

Hypothetically, let’s say I was going to school late and I was starving for a million hours. If the snack ended at 10:05 and it was 10:15, I would not have any time to eat anything and my starvation would have continued until lunch. The food is healthy,Or else you would be weak and sick and might die to hunger.

So if the snack was longer I would not have time to eat and not miss out.

Which is another reason to have extra snack time. So then It would be nice if the snack was 30-35 Minutes long.This will make us more happy and then we could behave better.

 

Third reason, We should have more snack time is because If we have more snack time we will be in a better mood.Also, when we are in a better mood we behave better and learn better because we are satisfied with what we have eaten.

And we could enjoy all of our time when we eat.

In conclusion, kids like me need more snacks so they can have time to eat their food,So then they Would not be in a hurry to finish their snack. We need the Extra snack time because if we don’t finish the food in time it could expire at the end of the day which is a waste of food .(Or you could eat it, but dont)

We will  behave better because we have finished our food which is good so if i had extra time(and the whole class) we will behave better

 

The reasons why we should get more time to eat are

 

Point  1 Why to have more snack time

Kids need to have snack because They need to eat, and eating is good to make you grow. So If we had 10+ mins of snack time the kids would Learn better because they have more energy.

 

Point 2 Do we need extra snack time?

Well yes and No Because some kids need more time to finish their snack, And if they do not finish their snack by the end of the day the snack could be expired and then that’s a waste of food.

And some kids finish their snack their snack to quick so then they could Choke.

 

Point 3 Will we behave better?

Well probably yes, We have more energy and we ate all of our food so we are in a better mood.

And when we are in better mood we behave much better.

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